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Old Habits Die Hard by ~IXtearsofbloodXI:iconIXtearsofbloodXI:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Transgressive > Open


Watching myself seep through my skin
I see myself unraveling at the ends
sadistic nurturing a crimson sin.

It helps me heal
and helps me deal
and sometimes just lets me know I'm real.

Do you know how it feels??
To feel so dead??
To have so many things go unsaid??

So you lock 'em away
even hide it from yourself
until you feel the silver sliding
and the blood seeping.

It makes you feel so real
because you can tell
it everything without
even speaking.

It doesnt judge you
or look at you funny.
It doesnt tell you that your pathetic
It only heals you
and gives you comfort
but I guess thats
something you cant understand.
©2005-2009 ~IXtearsofbloodXI
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Author's Comments

Its about cutting....

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~LandonCarlton Dec 1, 2005, 7:35:11 AM
it's really true.. not many people understand.. many are scrutinised and judged.. but there are others who understand..

good poetry.. but the rhyming breaks and is jittery.. is that the effect you aimed at creating?

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~IXtearsofbloodXI Dec 1, 2005, 7:38:03 AM
Thanx it has special meaning to me that i wasnt sure if people would see or understand but yes it wasnt supposed to be rhyming or not rhyming it was supposed to get to the meaning with both formats thanx for the comment :hug:!!!

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~LoVe Iz SuIcIdE~
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~LandonCarlton Dec 1, 2005, 7:41:05 AM
you're welcome.. and hey.. life's not all that depressing.. i guess i nv had the guts to cut.. but you're not alone in this :)

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~IXtearsofbloodXI Dec 1, 2005, 7:43:27 AM
yea i knows it not but normally it is it used to not be but i guess ive changed since i was a lil girl or maybe the realization just finally sunk in i donno i have my good times and my bad so it'll all even out sooner or later!!!

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~LoVe Iz SuIcIdE~
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~LandonCarlton Dec 1, 2005, 7:48:21 AM
haha okay.. erm. you dont use dots or commas to separate your words? gets a little difficult to read and a mouthful :) take care!

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~IXtearsofbloodXI Dec 1, 2005, 8:48:58 AM
:) thanx i never do i come from the middle of nowhere i know how i just dont lol!!!

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~LoVe Iz SuIcIdE~
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~BrokennByMortals Jan 1, 2006, 9:24:05 PM
:blackrose: The cuts they may run deeper than his cracking ever showed

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The slits
The cuts
The scars
The pain
the rubber bands
duct tape
and band-aids
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~IXtearsofbloodXI Jan 3, 2006, 9:20:43 AM
yea...maybe :hug:

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~LoVe Iz SuIcIdE~
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